Wednesday, February 8, 2012

Eavesdropping


Eavesdropping


Who pays attention to syntax
will never understand. 
Who pays attention to the
flutter of the brain? 
No one,  I hope, who lives
in this now town.

Let us go then you and I.
Let us go down for there is space.
Let us go down and confuse.
Let us go down and take away time.
Take away time.  
Will there still be sequences?  
Or only consequences?  
The truth is in New Mexico
and in the pudding.

Let us go then. 
The dewdrops from the eaves
are you and I.  Let us go down
and see if facts by themselves can take fire
and learn Finnish with its twenty-seven
cases, or are there twenty-nine?
Let us pretend.  Let us go down
where evenings meet underneath the sky.
Do you dare eat a peach?  
Take away time and who will drop
a question on your plate? 
Take away space and you are left
to sort through twenty-seven cases
of fruit (or is it twenty-nine?).

If I take your case, my friend,
my fee will be fee fie fo fum. 
I lost my sense of smell after the war.
Which war?  There were so many.
Start with Michael and his arch-
angels on their way back through
the arc de triomphe from Russia
with neither love nor hate nor victory.

Let us go then, you and I.
Let us take that long walk back
across the Paris Chinese border.
Let us go down where there is space
and eaves to drop their dew drops
from the shingles of the world.


                              Donnell Hunter
                                        8 February 2012

2 comments:

  1. Mr. Prufrock, I like this juxtaposition with cosmic time and space. After our conversation about learning language, I went to bed convinced that those linguistic mermaids will never "sing to me." I need a series of what you call "sequences" just to wrench the "consequences" of so much study just to master 2 or 3 languages. Then with while imagining a building the size of Texas full of people speaking tens of thousands of languages and their "children languages," I thought about the possibility of just one language. Speak to me in Spanish, Senor, and I will understand and respond in Goethe's German and you will know which direction we are headed on our long walk around the now ruined tower.

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    1. I was torn between plagiarism and admiration of the resident poets in my mind. I thought of putting quotation marks or footnotes, but I'm weaning myself from scholarly pursuits.
      Prufrock,yes, of course, but I have cummings, Abraham, James Bond (I have not seen nor will I ever),Frost, Salinger, Arnold and an old radio game show that had a town change its name to the name of the show. That I know of.

      Thanks for reading this.

      This was fun, almost like my recent aquarelles. I can even feel some Hugo vigor in some of the lines.

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