Eavesdropping
Who pays
attention to syntax
will
never understand.
Who pays
attention to the
flutter of
the brain?
No one, I hope, who lives
in this now
town.
Let us go
then you and I.
Let us go
down for there is space.
Let us go
down and confuse.
Let us go
down and take away time.
Take away
time.
Will
there still be sequences?
Or only
consequences?
The truth
is in New Mexico
and in
the pudding.
Let us go
then.
The dewdrops
from the eaves
are you
and I. Let us go down
and see
if facts by themselves can take fire
and learn
Finnish with its twenty-seven
cases, or
are there twenty-nine?
Let us
pretend. Let us go down
where evenings
meet underneath the sky.
Do you
dare eat a peach?
Take away
time and who will drop
a question
on your plate?
Take away
space and you are left
to sort through
twenty-seven cases
of fruit (or
is it twenty-nine?).
If I take
your case, my friend,
my fee will
be fee fie fo fum.
I lost my
sense of smell after the war.
Which war?
There were so many.
Start
with Michael and his arch-
angels on
their way back through
the arc de
triomphe from Russia
with
neither love nor hate nor victory.
Let us go
then, you and I.
Let us take
that long walk back
across
the Paris Chinese border.
Let us go
down where there is space
and eaves
to drop their dew drops
from the shingles
of the world.
—Donnell
Hunter
8
February 2012
Mr. Prufrock, I like this juxtaposition with cosmic time and space. After our conversation about learning language, I went to bed convinced that those linguistic mermaids will never "sing to me." I need a series of what you call "sequences" just to wrench the "consequences" of so much study just to master 2 or 3 languages. Then with while imagining a building the size of Texas full of people speaking tens of thousands of languages and their "children languages," I thought about the possibility of just one language. Speak to me in Spanish, Senor, and I will understand and respond in Goethe's German and you will know which direction we are headed on our long walk around the now ruined tower.
ReplyDeleteI was torn between plagiarism and admiration of the resident poets in my mind. I thought of putting quotation marks or footnotes, but I'm weaning myself from scholarly pursuits.
DeletePrufrock,yes, of course, but I have cummings, Abraham, James Bond (I have not seen nor will I ever),Frost, Salinger, Arnold and an old radio game show that had a town change its name to the name of the show. That I know of.
Thanks for reading this.
This was fun, almost like my recent aquarelles. I can even feel some Hugo vigor in some of the lines.